Thursday, September 11, 2008

Fifth Time's a Charm

Seriously. It is.
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Sara Brookshire said...

Brent!
I have enjoyed reading some of your posts from the last month.

Great short story exerpt. You have nicely revealed the personalities of each of the "faceless" characters. Good technique in creating pictures of people through a speaker who can't even see them . . literally. Nice. I'd like to read more.

I also appreciated your comments about your camp experiences. I like your honest dry humor . . . and the visual of the girl waiting the check her webkinz on the computer!
:)

Thanks for sharing your blog address. See you in class.
S. Brookshire

September 14, 2008 at 3:34 PM

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